Thursday, September 30, 2010

The Giver - Banned Book Week

Adults far and wide have challenged The Giver since it was published in 1993. Why?  I'm not sure. Seriously, how could anyone relate Jonas's colorless world to our overly bright, high definition society? Okay, maybe in the 1950's, before that TV thing splashed us with its first hues. Or if you're a big fan of that movie Pleasantville. But even then, banned? The Giver? Really?  Let's explore explanations of why some people have banned Jonas and his story, and simultaneously banned the ingenious storytelling of Lois Lowry. 

The Giver, by Lois Lowry

The GiverJonas lives with his parents and younger sister in a black and white utopia of Sameness. It's a perfect place, according to the Community, where deep emotions and color are nonexistent, jobs are predetermined by Elders, and community means doing what you're told and liking it, because you were specially chosen for the role. In his twelfth year of life, Jonas is selected to be the future Receiver of Memory, the person chosen to store all the memories before the time of Sameness. When Jonas meets the Giver, from whom he will receive the memories, he realizes the gift of knowledge and what it holds. Color. Music. Love. Emotions. Power. Things his family and community have lived without, in order to create a sense of harmony and likeness.


There's more to Jonas's world than Sameness and monotony. It's far more complex than Grey. Families are allowed only one boy and one girl. Children are born to designated Birthmothers. Pills suppress emotions, referred to as Stirrings. People who break rules, including unfit babies, can be Released, meaning euthanized and sent "Elsewhere."

But from the beginning Jonas is different. His eyes are light-colored, his curiosities unmatched by his peers. After he discovers knowledge from the memories, he has to make a choice: Stay with his family or leave his dysopic community forever.

Lois Lowry's utopic/dystopic novel, set in the future, weaves several themes into a Colorful blanket. But the book is consistently challenged. Let's be honest, Jonas's world is unrealistic, especially by today's baseline media blitz where kids consume content from iEverythings. Jonas's world is fake. But it's also believable because of Lowry's master storytelling and seamless prose. If you march in the banned book camp, ask yourself, what better place to explore such heavy topics with young people? A futuristic society of Sameness, one that subtly reminds us of The Hunger Games, without the poison arrows and dog maulings.

The form is simple: Throw a character in the future, make her world hell, and give her enough curiosity, knowledge, and skill to endure, escape, or destroy it. For young readers, the reading experience is safe. Jonas's world feels unreachable, unfathomable, but his experiences eerily connect with them in unforeseen ways.

The obstacles, fears, and choices a character faces can, and often do, directly connect with readers across generations. Books are rarely taught because of their settings or alternate communities. It just so happens that dystopic settings and rule-stricken communities force characters, especially  adolescents, to make big, life-changing decisions.  

Every year my overprivileged sixth graders beg for permission to read ahead. The book? The Outsiders. A violent, raucous, coming-of-age story about a kid who's lost, who has no identity, who doesn't belong. His friends drink, smoke, rumble, stab, and shoot, and they do all of this with little moral conscience, granted you could argue self-defense. My point? The Outsiders is set in the antithesis of my students' lives. East and West. Poor and Rich (though my students could be the rich ones). Socs and Greasers. But the story affects them. They relate to Ponyboy's sense of self, his self-conscious behavior in front of an unattainable girl, his search for a place in the world.  

In The Giver, Lowry achieves the same reader connection through Jonas. Jonas searches for a place where he can use his newly obtained knowledge, where love, music, and color are welcomed and embraced. Jonas wants what all young people want in life. They want a place to be themselves. A place where they're embraced. A place that doesn't hurt and mix them up inside. A place where they belong.

Through stories and characters, many find that place. And it makes them feel full of Color.          

Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Story... in words

Click PLAY and keep on clicking. It's all yours.

Monday, September 20, 2010

Top Ten Writing Mistakes...

...of my sixth grade students. Still interested? Of course you are.

My sixth graders are solid writers. And I'm not pointing out these mistakes because they're glaring weaknesses. But these are the common mistakes I saw in their first writing pieces. And yes, most of them, by coincidence, misspelled the same words. I guess it was the writing prompt (It was a dark and stormy night...), which was based on one of their summer reading books, A Wrinkle In Time. There were other assignment requirements, but I'll spare you the details.

Here they are:
  • 'dissapeared' (disappeared)
  • 'relized' (realized)
  • no comma separating compound sentences (at least they're writing compound sentences!)
  • no comma after introductory adverbs (I have a bad relationship with adverbs anyway. We haven't talked in years.)
  • overuse of 'all of a sudden'
  • overuse of 'very' (I've permanently banned this word, but for some reason students still think they can get away with it. Rule breakers.)
  • no comma after an introductory clause (not a big deal)
  • 'apperentely' (Seriously, they all spell it the same, like their fifth grade spellling books taught it that way.)
  • Okay, I lied. There are only eight common mistakes.  

Sunday, September 12, 2010

Change Is Good, Same Is Bad

Monday begins week three of school. It'll be the first five-day week of the year. What will I do? How will I make it to Friday without my brain exploding from hearing my name too many times?  I'll find a way.  I'll start with Patience and then, if I have to, I'll reach for Mega Patience. If those fail, I'll call up All the Patience in the World. One of those will help me survive. If not, I'll turn to my super power. Coffee. Lots of it. Speaking of surviving...  

I'm over halfway through Mockingjay. It's slower than The Hunger Games and Catching Fire. I'd go as far as saying this: the first third is mostly backstory and catching readers up with the destruction in the first two books. But I won't go as far as saying that Suzanne Collins and her editor blinked on this one. I've heard the second half is filled with more of Collins' page-turning action. Looking forward to that.

NPR's Three Minute Fiction Contest is back. Check out the rules and think about taking a breather from your work-in-progress. That's my plan. It should be yours too. Come on, it's only 600. More on this after I write my entry, which I'm sure will be tossed in the burn pile. Or simply deleted.

This morning I drank coffee, ate half a bagel, completed a T. Rex puzzle with Blondie, toyed with a sprinkler valve that pointed at me and called me names, watched the Colts lose, and then reread my partial chapter that I subbed to my critique group. (I also did a lot of school prep work, but you don't want to hear about that, it's like watching people walk their dogs). I subbed a partial chapter purposefully and asked for predictions. Good to shake things up a little. Change is good. Same is bad. If I ran for public office, or class president, that would be my slogan. I'd lose. Badly.

Hey, there's a story. Teacher vs. Student. For class president. Write it. 

I've gone insane. I've set two goals. Major ones.

1. to finish Bird Nerd by Halloween.
2. to write a novel in November (as part of NaNoWriMo).

Smile, it's only Monday.  You have an entire week of writing ahead of you. 

 

Wednesday, September 8, 2010

Things That Shatter

I'm about to start writing, but first I thought I'd spill some words on you, just in case they're no good. That way they don't end up in my manuscript. And the worst case scenario is that you get bored and click somewhere else. Hope not. But I'm a realist. Maybe I can use the word case again somewhere, since I can't shew it away from my consciousness.

(rubbing eyes)

Nope. Can't think of a way to use it.

Oh, wait. Have you read Justin Case?
(if you clicked the previous link, you're a Chalkhead who's a step ahead)

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I've put up an excerpt for critique over at Chalk Talk. Check it out.  Feel free to post a brief moment from your WIP or completed manuscript. Chalkheads don't bite.

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I had a few quality conversations today with my school's librarians. They're some of my favorite people. They keep me informed, feed me books, and let me ramble about my summer exploits, which included:
  • watering plants
  • watering grass
  • painting the house
  • changing diapers
  • watering grass
  • writing
  • reading
  • running
  • watering grass
  • watching crappy movies thanks to Netflix
There was much more to my summer. The Santa Barbara Zoo, house guests, sleepness nights, bomb shelter tours. But I'll spare you the details. You have more important things to do, like reading on...
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These things have been on my mind lately:
  • rereading The Tiger Rising (because it's that good)
  • remodeling my classroom (adding a bathroom and an office, maybe a lounge with a flatscreen, maybe a full size fridge)
  • becoming a real bird nerd (for character research)
  • flying to Brazil (for character research)
  • opening a bookstore (not in this economy)
  • revisiting peanut butter and jelly (it's also that good)
  • what to be for Halloween (vampires out, Alf in)
  • Santa Monica (it's that awesome)
  • sushi (need it soon)
  • declaring myself a Mockingjay (But the series is over!)
Shattered dreams.